their words are there
shoved out in front
like ships proud prow’d
but i refuse their refuse
exposed, greaseless bare bearings
brake and bind by their breaking
20161020 prompt from dverse
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erbiage 
Some nice turns of phrase here, and great use of homophones.
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Thank you for reading, and your kind comment. I’m glad you like it
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Excellent use of homophones here 🙂
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Thank you Sanaa
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Very well done! Especiall like “but i refuse their refuse.” So glad you posted!
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Thank you Lillian. I had debated that one a bit, it looked odd in print, but I think it works and I’m glad you like it
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I like the defiance in not bowing to hurtful words.
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Thank Brian. If there is a place for hurtful words, I do not know about it.
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Great how you wove in so many homophones in so few lines!!
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Thank you Victoria, density is interesting.
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