Suspension (bridge) of disbelief

In the swarf of used grinding paste
Lie magnetic bits of unconformity.      12
The last attempt of the material
To maintain it’s nature, it’s culture.    24
It has been wrenched from the earth
Roasted, summer smelted, molded,      36
winter tempered, three foot eight,
 Coiled, Forged into spring

A quadrille, prompt served up at the dVerse Poets pub


11 thoughts on “Suspension (bridge) of disbelief

  1. “magnetic bits of unconformity” your image of the metal spring being forged and rebelling is quite compelling and I like how you play with the seasons as well.


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