we say this is a three dimensional place
but up and down dont go very far
and north south east west just
come around again after some distance
so tomorrow we will go back to the office.
even this is too much
so we picture this as a plane
our day to day is basically a flat earth
and move between home work and the mall
the market or the river or the well
there still too much there
so much to experience, to feel
that we block out even more
shrink those planes to a line
or two (of coke? poetry?)
right wrong
black white
left right
red pill blue pill
choose the parameters just right
and decision becomes easy, obvious
we make machines that help unravel the weaving
navi to reduce all roads to the one we need
music to cover the wall of sounds assaulting
beating on the ear drums
tv to numb and provide perfected thoughts
social media to reinforce what i think i know
(rather, what i got from the show)
and yet there are woods and streams beyond the city
)there is always a forbidden forest near the castle(
roads beyond my current route
and up there, space.
rockets demonstrate the longing
kitchen cabinets and walk-in closets too.
in open floorplans, in every successful sales pitch,
there are signs. (like this one)
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partially inspired by https://www.brainpickings.org/2015/12/09/the-physicist-and-the-philosopher-einstein-bergson-jimena-canales/
This is all really great. And this: “rockets demonstrate the longing / kitchen cabinets and walk-in closets too.”
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Thanks Qbit. it’s a good start at least. Does it jump around too much?
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Rereading just now. Sure, you could probably tighten it up. But I don’t think you want to lose all the rolling energy.
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I usually misread the signs. How about you?
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oh yeah all the time! i should have made a left at Albequerque!
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reductio ad absurdum !
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All brilliant; I’ve been reading it over and over. Cannot argue with your clear (if jaundiced) observations – ‘and yet there are woods …’ for which I am thankful (in life and in the poem) and yes, there are signs.
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